That doesn't bode well for me at the moment.
Maybe verbalizing it will make things better. Does one verbalize in writing or is it a spoken thing only?
Meanwhile, in other writing projects, I have an editor from Prentiss Hall calling me and leaving me messages. Blast it. I'll never make money going to an editor. On the other hand, I don't have time for marketing.
I don't think anybody ever got rich off of prepositional phrases. Of course, dangling participles are a whole other issue.